Directions:Suppose the student union of your university is collecting opinions on improving its work for the coming year. You are now to write a response by suggesting how it can better enrich student life. You will have 3O minutes to write the essay. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

（要求：假设你所在大学的学生会正在就如何改进来年的工作征集意见。现在你需要写一篇回应文章，提出如何能更好地丰富学生生活的方法。你将有 30 分钟的时间来撰写这篇文章。文章字数应至少 120 词但不超过 180 词。）

解题思路

1.审题定位:应用文(建议信)，核心需求是"改进学生会工作"+"丰富学生生活"，受众是学生会，语气需礼貌、务实，格式要规范(称呼、正文、结尾、署名)。

2.框架搭建:

3.开头:表明身份(学生)+写作目的(响应意见征集，提出改进建议);

4.中间:分2-3个具体建议，每个建议配"做法+预期效果"(如"加强心理健康支持""开设月度讲座+线上咨询""缓解学业压力");

5.结尾:表达期待，感谢学生会采纳。

6.素材适配:结合校园场景，优先选择学生关注度高的方向(心理健康、活动多样性、技能提升、资源利用)。

核心难点

1.建议空洞无具体措施，仅说"多组织活动"而非"组织兴趣小组、技能培训";

2.格式不规范(遗漏称呼、结尾敬语);

3.语气过于强硬或随意，不符合建议信的礼貌性要求。

解决技巧

具体化表达:用"specific measures+expected outcomes"（具体措施+预期结果）结构,

如 "Organize the multifarious group activities (e.g., book clubs, sports events) to meet diverse interests and enhance interpersonal bonds";（组织各种团体活动（如读书俱乐部、体育赛事），以满足不同的兴趣，增进人际关系。）

2.固定格式模板:

3. 称呼: Dear Student Union;

4. -开头: I am a student from [Your Major/Grade]. Having learned you are collecting opinions on improving work, I am writing to put forward some suggestions;

（我是[你的专业/年级]的学生。得知你们正在收集改进工作的意见，我写信是想提出一些建议）

5. -结尾: I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Looking forward to a more vibrant campus life. Sincerely, [Your Name];

（我希望这些建议会有所帮助。期待更有活力的校园生活。真诚的，[你的名字]）

6. 语气把控:使用"could/should/might"等情态动词，避免"you must"等强硬表达。

参考范文:

Dear Student Union,

I am a student from Grade 2, majoring in English. Having learned that you are collecting opinions on improving your work to enrich students' campus life, I am writing to put forward some practical suggestions.

尊敬的学生会：

我是来自高二年级的英语专业学生。得知你们正在收集关于改进工作以丰富学生校园生活的意见，我特此提出一些切实可行的建议。

Firstly, it is advisable to strengthen mental health support for students. You could invite psychologists to give monthly lectures on stress management and open an online consulting channel, which will help relieve academic pressure effectively. Secondly, organizing more thematic group activities, such as book clubs, sports competitions and handicraft workshops, can meet students' diverse interests and enhance their interpersonal relationships. Finally, adding skill training courses, like office software operation and public speaking, will better prepare students for future study and work.

首先，应加强对学生的心理健康支持。可以邀请心理学家每月举办关于压力管理的讲座，并开通在线咨询渠道，这将有效缓解学生的学业压力。其次，组织更多主题性的团体活动，如读书俱乐部、体育比赛和手工艺工作坊，能够满足学生多样化的兴趣需求，并增进他们的人际交往。最后，增设技能培训课程，如办公软件操作和公开演讲等，将更好地帮助学生为未来的学习和工作做好准备。

I hope these suggestions will be helpful to your work. Looking forward to a more vibrant fulfilling campus life.

Sincerely,

Li Ming

希望这些建议对你们的工作有所帮助。期待一个更加充满活力和充实的校园生活。

诚挚地，

李明